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Academic writing for undergraduate (Bachelor's), postgraduate (Master's, PhD) students and academics across disciplines informed by applied-linguistics
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Stav is a respected member of our tutor community. He is highly recommended for his commitment and the quality of his lessons. An excellent choice to progress with confidence.
About Stav
I have assisted undergraduate (Bachelor's) and postgraduate students (Master's, PhD) successfully write academically across many disciplines for over a decade. Additionally, I have helped many junior and senior academics successfully publish their manuscripts in peer-reviewed journals.
Please feel free to enquire further about my experience and qualifications via email or telephone.
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Al-Ghareeb, A., Hillel, S., McKenna, L., Cleary, M., Visentin, D., Jones, M., . . . Gray, R. (2018). Retraction of publications in nursing and midwifery research: A systematic review. International Journal of Nursing Studies, 81, 8-13. doi:10.1016/j.ijnurstu.2018.01.013
Cardwell, R., Hillel, S. A., Gray, R., Davis, J., & McKenna, L. (2018). Defining clinical credibility: Protocol for a systematic review. Collegian. doi:10.1016/j.colegn.2018.07.003
Cardwell, R, Davis, J, Gray, R, Hillel, SA & Mckenna, L 2020, ‘How is clinical credibility defined in nursing? A systematic review’, Collegian (Royal College of Nursing, Australia), vol. 27, no. 1, pp. 23–33.
Chamberlain C, Ralph N, Hokke S, Clark Y, Gee G, et al. (2019) Healing the Past By Nurturing The Future: A qualitative systematic review and meta-synthesis of pregnancy, birth and early postpartum experiences and views of parents with a history of childhood maltreatment. PLOS ONE 14(12): e0225441.(concealed information)
Ellis, J. M., Ayala Quintanilla, B. P., Ward, L., Campbell, F., Hillel, S., Downing, C., . . . Ramirez, M. (2018). A systematic review protocol of educational programs for nursing staff on management of resident-to-resident elder mistreatment in residential aged care homes. Journal of Advanced Nursing, 74(8), 1975-1983. doi:10.1111/jan.13700
Gray, E., Hillel, S. A., Gray, R (2018). The safety and efficacy of acceptance and commitment therapy for schizophrenia spectrum and other psychotic disorders. A systematic review and meta-analysis of randomised controlled trials. Society for Mental Health Research Conference. Noosa, Queensland.
Gray, R., Al-Ghareeb, A., Davis, J., McKenna, L., & Amichai Hillel, S. (2018). Inclusion of nursing trials in systematic reviews after they have been retracted: Does it happen and what should we do? International Journal of Nursing Studies, 79, 154. doi:10.1016/j.ijnurstu.2017.12.006
Gray, R., Al-Ghareeb, A., Davis, J., McKenna, L., & Hillel, S. A. The Retraction of a Trial Included in a Meta-Analysis of Interventions to Enhance Oral Medication Adherence. Value in Health. doi:10.1016/j.jval.2018.07.005
Gray, R., Hillel, S., Brown, E., & Al Ghareeb, A. (2018). Safety and Efficacy of Acceptance and Commitment Therapy (ACT) in Schizophrenia Spectrum and Other Psychotic Disorders: Protocol for a Systematic Review and Meta-Analysis. Methods and Protocols, 1(4), 38.
Hillel, S (2017). Interpretative spaces for symptoms; Thoughts for a preventative psychoanalytically oriented psychiatry. 26th European Congress of Psychiatry. Nice, France.
Hillel, S A., & Ondracek, C. (2018). Reading lists: Implications for student-satisfaction and student learning. Talis Insight Asia-Pacific Conference, Melbourne, Australia.
Hillel, Stav Amichai (2018): A critique of lexical abruptness and Stammbaumtheorie in the Comparative Method. La Trobe. Journal contribution. (concealed information)
Hillel, Stav Amichai (2018): Behavioural activation for the treatment of unipolar depressive disorders in patients with a chronic physical illness: Protocol for a systematic review and meta-analysis. La Trobe. Journal contribution. (concealed information)
Hillel, Stav Amichai (2018): PRISMA-P for Efficacy of acceptance and commitment therapy (ACT) in schizophrenia spectrum and other psychotic disorders: Protocol for a systematic review and meta-analysis. La Trobe. Journal contribution. (concealed information)
Signorelli, M. C., Hillel, S., de Oliveira, D. C., Ayala Quintanilla, B. P., Hegarty, K., & Taft, A. (2018). Voices from low-income and middle-income countries: a systematic review protocol of primary healthcare interventions within public health systems addressing intimate partner violence against women. BMJ Open, 8(3), e019266. doi:10.1136/bmjopen-2(concealed information)
Wells, Y. D., Hillel, S., Hunter, N., Clune, S., Johnstone, E., & Quintanilla, B. (2018). AACQA literature review: Choice and quality in community care. Melbourne: La Trobe University.
Wells, Y., Hillel, S., Hunter, N., Clune, S., Johnstone, E., & Quintanilla, B. (2018). Literature review on choice and quality in home-based and community-based aged care. Report for the Australian Aged Care Quality Agency
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- Ordinary Level
- Form 5
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levels :
Primary school
Ordinary Level
Form 5
Form 6
Ordinary Diploma
Adult Education
Bachelor’s Degree
Master’s Degree
PhD / Doctorate
Nursery
- English
All languages in which the lesson is available :
English
Academic texts (e.g.: PhD dissertation, journal article manuscript, undergraduate assignment) are produced within the constraints of (1) register, (2) genre, and (3) style* (I explain these below). My approach teaches you how to be sensitive to these constraints to ensure your success - be it passing your PhD examination, getting published in a peer-reviewed journal, or passing an assignment. These constraints are crucial as they ensure your audience (e.g.: PhD examiner, journal reviewer, university tutor) recognises your writing for what you intend it to be. Depending on your requirements, we consider your writing at the sentence level (i.e., how to write clear sentences), the paragraph level (i.e., how to write clear topic sentences to built an argument), and the chapter (or article/essay) level (i.e., how to write a complete text whose sections flow).
(1) Register
Register refers to the rules and conventions of writing according to your discipline (and other parameters such as ontology, epistemology, and methodology). For example, a writer in STEM (science, technology, engineering and mathematics) typically writes information-prominent sentences and doesn’t signal their position in relation to that information. Consider the following fictitious example: "Most healthy adults recover from an acute bout of bronchitis in two to three weeks (Limpman et al., 2019).” In contrast, a writer in HASS (Humanities and Social Sciences) is more likely to write author-prominent sentences and does signal their position in relation to the information being cited. For example: “At the end of their observational study, Limpman et al. (2019) claimed that most healthy adults recover from an acute bout of bronchitis in two to three weeks.”
(2) Genre
Genre refers to the rules and conventions of writing according to the text you’re producing. Again, a writer in STEM commonly produces reports of conducted experiments. These reports are highly structured under headings such as “introduction,” “methodology,” “methods,” “results,” “discussion,” and “conclusion.” It is these headings that signpost the piece, ensuring the readers are oriented through the text. Contrastively, a writer in HASS typically writes essays with no such headings. For HASS writers, their topic sentences in their essay need to lead the reader through the piece.
(3) Style
Style refers to your individual way of writing. We all have different ways of expressing content. Some writers, for example, wholeheartedly deploy the first-person active voice (“In this essay, I demonstrate that children best learn in a zone of proximal development”), whilst others don’t ("In this essay, it is demonstrated that children best learn in a zone of proximal development”). Differences in style is important - academic writing would be extremely mundane otherwise. Nevertheless, differences in style must work with register and genre.
*These descriptors come from Biber & Conrad (2009; Register, genre, and style. Cambridge University Press), however my usage of them differs.
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I highly recommend Stav to any student who is struggling with their research. Stav has been instrumental in helping me progress through my PhD research during times when it felt overwhelming. He is reliable, kind, understanding, and professional, and he consistently provides constructive feedback. Thanks so much Stav!Stav was integral in helping me formulate my qualitative study for my doctoral dissertation. I cannot recommend him highly enough!
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